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Street-Light Bystander

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WARNING: Contains vore and suspenseful situations!

Hey everyone, this is a request for maw-eats-people involving her character, Hallow, as a naga and his "interesting" experience with a young girl who happens to be at the wrong street light.





Flashes of light shone by as a cool wet shower fell on the darkening skies above. Reflections of benches, the soft steps of people, and street lights reflected off the now damp asphalt. The shimmering skyscrapers and the buildings started going dark as the pale sunset continued its ever declining cycle. The night lights sparked to life as the evening approached. The flags on the cities' only bank flew proudly in the brisk breezes picking up in the air. The clear glass doors open smoothly as a pretty and young woman steps out into the cool evening atmosphere.

Her straps from her leather overcoat started flapping freely in the wind while her smooth face began smiling at the beautiful night, her auburn hair blowing harmoniously through the air. The woman exited the building fully as she headed down the sidewalk into the darkening night. As she headed down the concrete path, several whirring vehicles whizzed past her and added to the noisy symphony of the city. The woman arrived at her normal bus stop and smiled at the driver who'd just pulled up. She handed him a tip and went to the back of the bus as the driver took it gratefully and began his routine ten minute drive to edge of the city.  

The city noises died down after about five minutes and the woman pleasantly looked out the window, still seeing the remnants of the rain on the road and the colorful warping of color on their surfaces. Before long, the bus stopped at the woman's station and she departed off the vehicle, thanking the driver and smiling at the apartment buildings and little shops that populated this part of the city. She looked at her bronze watch, five minutes after eight, she smiled as she had some extra time before going home and decided to go to the nearby park and sit for awhile. The woman walked swiftly towards the park, her sturdy pumps making soft noises on the sidewalk as the breezes still played with her hair and jacket straps.

Time rushed by as the woman briskly walked through the night and arrived at her favorite bench. She smiled at the flickering street lamps by the bench and at the almost musical sound of the insects in the park. She found herself humming along and smiling at the cool, goose bump feeling that etched its way up her arms into her face, making her giggle. She set her bag down on the bench and relaxed down on her bench as she watched the breeze flow freely through the trees and the bushes wave in the wind. Her watch chimed as it reached half past, making the woman chuckle at her extra time before resuming her unison humming.

High above the park ground, with the branches of the many oak trees that populated the beautiful area, something was stirring in its sleep, a creature that'd been recently awakened by the most pleasing scent. The giant white figure leaned up and yawned before smelling a sweet smelling fragrance, like roses in spring; float up into its nose, making it shiver. The giant figure slithered down the stalk of the tree to get a better "taste" of the scent and smiled at the amplifying smell. The big hybrid looked out into the dark-blue sky and spotted a pretty human female sitting on a bench, humming blissfully.

The giant snakelike creature smiled and licked its furry, black lips as it continued to stare at the mesmerizing human with its deep sapphire eyes. After what seemed long hours of staring, the creature began to slowly slither from its perch to the ground. It continued smiling as it drooled at the pretty female that he'd spotted. Something had started to develop in this creatures mind, a longing, it had respect for the pretty human but wanted her inside of it, he wanted to eat it and taste its soft skin.

It almost lost control of its drooling as it reached the ground and headed towards the human slowly, careful not to be caught in the light shone by the street lamps. The woman was still sitting there on her bench and had been admiring the different patterns the constellations in the sky made, when she kicked her pumps off and ran her bare feet through the soft grass playfully, enjoying the tickling texture on her skin. Her emerald eyes scanned the trees and the skyline, causes a grin of admiration at the area and her life. The creature slithered closer and closer, its white fur and scales devoid of any sound as it inched towards its target, its blue tongue flicking out in an anxious fury.

The woman still was blissfully running her feet through the soft grass when she started hearing the faintest crackling and dripping from somewhere to her right. She looked and, for a moment, couldn't see anything as she scanned the area with her light green eyes. Then she saw it, a giant half snake-like creature hidden in the bushes with white fur or scales up its body and spots of red and white populated around its black mouth. She almost screamed but held it within her as she got up slowly and then bolted in the opposite direction towards the exit to the park, leaving her bag and shoes on the bench in a frenzy. The creature saw its pretty morsel bolt off into the night and proceeded to slither after it quickly. Ever inch it gained, more saliva dripped off its blue tongue and its smile grew larger as the intoxicating scent grew closer and closer as the creature went faster and faster.

The woman's chest pounded hard as she felt the rush of adrenaline through her body, pushing her farther and allowing her to go faster. She dared to look back once and squealed inside herself as she saw the white snake creature gaining closer and closer to her. She tried to run faster but couldn't as she felt her adrenaline declining. The naga creature smiled as it saw its prey tire and slow down, it bolted quickly forward and tripped the pretty human, making her fall on the ground with a grunt.

She quickly turned and backed away on all fours before being coiled up in the creature's greedy coils and being forced to face the creature's smiling, salivating maw. "P….please, creature, d…don't hurt me…." she said with fear. "Oh my pretty human, I wouldn't hurt such an exquisite creature like yourself", the creature responded in his deep soothing voice. "W…well c...can you let me go, I...I haven't done anything to you, j...Just was enjoying the park", she said softly.

"I was enjoying the park too, b...but I want to do something with you, he-he, I just said I wouldn't hurt you, nothing else…" he said while grinning. She looked at him confused until his coils started pushing her towards his head and his mouth opened revealing his deep blue maw radiant with shiny saliva and an energetic tongue. Only now did she understand and let out a gasp before trying to struggle out of his grasp. "No, no, no mister p…please, don't, e…eat me, please don't…" she begged while she was pushed towards the soaked maw almost suggestively. The creature just chuckled and clamped his wide mouth on her head and started to drool and lick it all over, growling pleasurably at her unique flavor and exhilarating scent. His saliva coated her head as he pushed down on it, engulfing her up to her chest and licking her everywhere.

He continued to growl happily as she was pushed farther into his blue maw. He grabbed her waist with his hands and lifted her up in the air to add gravity to his plan. She started to slide down the wet maw faster as he gulped her waist and upper legs with joy. She screamed and thrashed around furiously before starting to lose her energy as it sapped out of her. She almost felt relief as the blue muscles massaged her frail body and beckoned her deeper into the riveting throat.

She fell down on his tongue as her knees were entering his maw and just put her face on the soft, fleshy tongue, drained of all energy. The creature giggled as he felt his catch go limp and continued to swallow her up with pleasure, gulping her fully into his mouth. He began to swallow quickly, pushing the skinny female into his insatiable gullet. He started to purr deeply as he felt his "heroine" slide down his moving throat and rubbed the bulge that started slowly traveling down into his chest.

The woman just lay there and felt the massaging throat muscles move her deeper within the creature towards what could only be the stomach. She sighed at her last few moments of life and let out a tear of remorse. She felt herself slide into a blue chamber, wider than his throat, but still cramped and saw most of her body covered in a weird looking blue gel liquid. She just collapsed against the stomach wall and waited for this gel or liquids to start to dissolve her. The creature purred one last time before started back to its dwellings, feeling its pretty go limp and collapse in its stomach.

The creature arrived at a giant pile of rocks and boulders in the park and slithered into hits hole, snuggling against the soft dirt underneath and  resting its head on the bulge in his stomach. The woman dazed in and out of consciousness before finally closing her eyes for the final time and falling against the vibrating, blue flesh. The creature awoke happily before dawn and nuzzled his stomach lovingly to make sure his passenger was still okay, he could hear her steady breathing and smiled at her seemingly comfortable sleep.

About an hour later, the woman awoke in a slightly dark atmosphere and tried to adjust herself to see what was happening. She tried to move but felt her body wrapped up in something and looked to see the snake creature that had eaten her with his coils around her, hugging her side. He opened one eye as she struggled a little and smiled. "How did you sleep my dear", he asked softly. "U...Um pretty good actually, w…wait wait why am I still here, why d...Didn't I get digested in your belly", she said, still shocked thinking about it.

"Oh, heh, I don't have a digestive tract, that blue gel that you saw in my tummy helps me digest dead things like cooked stuff and mostly what you call sweets, he-he I love your sweets", he said happily. "S…so you weren't going to kill me", she asked, dumbfounded. "No, silly, I said I wasn't going to hurt you, I think your very pretty and you taste fantastic miss, c...Can I ask your name, my dear", he said politely. She blushes as she says, "Oh, um, my name is Jane, hmm, and what's your name my snake friend", she said, relieved. "My name's Hallow, and I'm not a snake exactly, I'm a naga, it's like a half snake hybrid, although it's not my original form, I take many shapes", he said while licking her face affectionately.

"Well your very nice Hallow he-he, um, can I stay with you for a few days, your very warm and I'd like to know more about you, especially after that, um, interesting experience in you warm stomach", she asked. His face lit up as he hugged her, "Of course you can stay with me, I'd like to know more about you Jane, you're a very pretty human and I'd love to keep you warm", Hallow responded happily. Jane rested her head on Hallow's furry chest and hummed happily at her new friend who hugged her with his paws and snuggled against her lovingly, hoping to get to find out about his beautiful human friend…


THE END

Well I hope that everyone enjoyed it, especially maw-eats-people he-he, I of course apologize for any spelling and grammar and also for the minor lateness of this request, been a busy week :D, thanks!!!
Well as I said this was a request made by !Maw-Eats-People10 and I hope she and all my readers enjoy it. I hope I got Hallow's features right and that it turned out okay, hehe, I thought it was an okay story but oh well :D
Hallow Belongs to :iconmaw-eats-people10:
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